人的記憶力會隨著歲月的流逝而衰退,寫作可以彌補(bǔ)記憶的不足,將曾經(jīng)的人生經(jīng)歷和感悟記錄下來,也便于保存一份美好的回憶。相信許多人會覺得范文很難寫?接下來小編就給大家介紹一下優(yōu)秀的范文該怎么寫,我們一起來看一看吧。
美國大學(xué)留學(xué)申請書篇一
i have always enjoyed studying maths, physics and chemistry, and i would like the opportunity to continue this study. chemical engineering appeals to me because of the challenges involved in the application of scientific theory to practical, real world problems such as how to deal with nuclear waste. i particularly look forward to studying fluid dynamics as i was introduced to this during the engineering education scheme (ees). i am aware that in today’s world chemical engineering has an increasingly important role across a wide range of industries from pharmaceuticals to petrochemicals. the broad range of career paths, and the opportunity to contribute to society through technological innovation, is for me, one of the main attractions of chemical engineering.
i have applied to take part in the year in industry scheme during which i hope to gain practical experience, as well as greater maturity enabling me to go into my degree course with improved skills and broader experience. i also hope to study e-learning courses on project management and presentation skills run by the icheme. in year 12 i took part in the ees, which improved my understanding and skills in team working, time management, and report writing, as well as visual and oral presentation. throughout the course of the project the team had to frequently correspond with mentors in industry and academia and this experience has broadened my appreciation of practice and application in a real life situation. in july i attended a week-long ‘into engineering’ seminar run by react engineering. working in two teams, we were given a design exercise based upon a typical decommissioning project. i also attended a headstart course at newcastle university, which i thoroughly enjoyed. one of the main activities was to design, manufacture and test a small crane. i found both of these experiences very challenging, as we were given only limited time so we had to prioritise our tasks and carefully plan our year a fellow student and i were awarded £500 by the european scholarship prize to fund a visit to prague to do research for our a-level history coursework. i gained an understanding of the city’s culture and history and further developed my independence. during the summer i represented my school on a connexions review of a government white paper on 14-19 education. i gained an insight into the government’s proposals and learned a lot about working with different groups of people. last year i was part of the editorial team for the school magazine. i wrote a number of articles and i was responsible for ensuring that staff contributions were ready for the deadline. i also enjoy participating in a range of sports and have represented the school at football and cricket, which has further enhanced my team working my spare time i am working towards my duke of edinburgh gold award. in september i completed a 4-day expedition in the lake district, which tested my endurance but gave me a great sense of achievement. as part of the award i have been helping at the local youth café once a week, which i am really enjoying as it gives me the chance to meet new people. i also enjoy reading, particularly books on physics and russian history. i am really interested in computers and i am currently trying to configure a linux based file and print server for my home network.
for admission to a university in england you have to fill in a form from the universities and colleges admissions service (ucas). they for a very reasonable fee provide all applicants to unversities and colleges in the uk with a way to apply to up to 6 universities (or multiple courses at, say 3 universities). part of the form (apart from all the obvious details such as name and address), is half a page where you are asked to write about yourself, your interests and so on. inevitably you have to make it sound as good as possible, as you're trying to sell yourself to the universities you're applying to...i applied to the universities of aston, bath, bristol, cambridge, imperial college london, and loughborough. all for an meng (master of engineering degree) in chemical engineering, except for bristol where i went for an meng in computer science, so this is tailored towards those courses. anyway... here it is. i don't guarantee that you won't get bored! ;-). (nb this was written in the summer of 1999, and is therefore not too current!).reasons for course choice
since beginning secondary school, i've been very interested in chemistry and computing. besides my normal schoolwork i've read around these two subjects. because i am also very keen on mathematics and physics, i want to pursue a degree course that combines all or most of these. both of my parents are science/engineering graduates and they have taught me some of the qualities needed for a degree course in this field. this has encouraged me to find out about the opportunities available. aims
i have applied to several firms for sponsorship while at university and during a gap year, with the intention of getting engineering-related work experience. this would give me valuable experience for the course at university. i hope to obtain a master of engineering degree and become employed in research and development in the oil or food industry. eventually, i would like to do postgraduate study, and perhaps even teach chemistry/engineering. interests
i play basketball, tennis, volleyball, and i like kayaking. by far my biggest sports interest, however, is orienteering. i've won several trophies for andalusian and league championships, and i've helped to organise regional orienteering events. i have also designed the database system for my club. my greatest interest outside school is computing. i have done a large amount of web design. i help maintain the computer systems at my father's workplace; and i also do some part time work teaching people on a one-to-one basis how to use their computers. i like writing manuals or "notes" on things related to computers, and have published an article on web design in a small us computer magazine. i have written papers on the use of data-logging and other equipment for my school's science department. this year, i was responsible for laying out my school's entire yearbook using dtp software. recently, i was employed developing a web site and training staff for an organisation in london. when i have time i play the keyboard, and also do some sound engineering: i used to operate the mixing desk at my local church, as well as help at my parents' workplace, which is a professional recording studio. i enjoy teaching and have given weekly tuition in maths and english. general points
i've lived in spain for 14 years and am fluent in spanish. in addition, my parents work with north africans, middle easterners, americans, spaniards, britons, and people of other nationalities. i have gained valuable experience growing up with many different cultures around me, and as a result appreciate the difficulties of cross-cultural communication. i have been part of several "king's kids", teams which perform music and dance all over spain. this entailed travelling away from home for 3 weeks at a time, and having to work with around 60 other people. i think that this has made me a fairly rounded person, and i therefore feel confident about "fitting in" with people from any culture.
yours sincerely,
美國大學(xué)留學(xué)申請書篇二
研究你所申請的學(xué)校。大部分學(xué)校會在admission page上提供校方對申請者的要求。充分了解該所學(xué)校,你愈可能寫好你的ps,以此證明你對該所學(xué)校確實十分地感興趣。你得花費(fèi)功夫給讀信者一種印象:你花了更多的時間使自己對該所學(xué)校了解得比其他的申請者更透徹,這些特別功夫使讀信人對你的勤奮,專心致志和對該院系的興趣有著十分良好的印象。這些特別了解和信息不必在每字之間中提出,也無須特別夸張其辭,你的陳述只需包含足夠的信息使人留下你做了特別努力的印象即可。
由于學(xué)校的類型以及所選學(xué)校的威望,錄取委員會將會閱讀每年至少上千份文書,為了讓你的文章有說服力,令人難忘和個性突出,在回答特定問題時,請保留在概括性問題答案中提及的一些細(xì)節(jié),讓你總結(jié)性的陳述成為一個包容萬知的文檔,給入學(xué)委員會留下一個印象:你比你所陳述的更有內(nèi)涵。
在申請文檔中避免不同部分之間的冗長重復(fù),不要只在行文間陳述你的平均績點和課程,這些東西在申請中是會被予以與其它部分相當(dāng)?shù)闹匾?,然而如果你認(rèn)為平均績點和課程有所需解釋之處則不妨多寫一些,比如說,你可以講明某一些平均績點的不定是因為生病或是家庭問題所致,除了這些情況,千萬別為你的分?jǐn)?shù)找理由,入學(xué)委員會每年都要讀過成百上千個這樣的理由。
在一篇個人陳述中介紹自己可以有著不同的形式格局,就像每個人講話一樣風(fēng)格不拘。然而,一篇成功的個人陳述,是一種比較有針對性的自我介紹,聚焦于申請表格提出的兩個問題回答“我是誰”,“我能提供些什么”,成功的陳述從未偏離過這兩個主題介紹自身,描述你作為有競爭力候選者的潛能。
因此,將個人經(jīng)歷中涉及主題的主要成就,轉(zhuǎn)折點和大事件必須相應(yīng)地著重突出,分析你的個人簡歷,個人歷史和記憶,將生涯中決定性事件單獨突出。
一旦你找齊你的個人信息,為你的文章陳述找到一個框架,你已準(zhǔn)備好了,可以動手寫了,在此過程的一個要素是選擇特定的觀點角度來陳述你的資料,當(dāng)然,你的選擇有賴于多來年你所養(yǎng)成的特殊風(fēng)格。
第一人稱敘事,這是基本常見的方式,“我”字頻頻使用,對大部分體裁,它都可能用專業(yè)學(xué)校和研究生院經(jīng)常使用此方法,因其直接切入主題,這種方法最大的危險在于你如果不改變句型就極易使讀者厭煩,別在通篇文章中給描述語前面加上主語,改變它們的'詞序,注意詞語句子長度,改變文章的面貌和筆感。
第二人稱敘事使用“你”字,這種方法極少見但地讀者和作者之間建立心靈交流卻有關(guān)鍵作用,通常在講述故事的體裁中使用,其不足之處在于讀者會覺得過于私人性質(zhì),交淺言深。
一篇好的文書首先要有一個主題,你可以像張靚穎一樣有天籟般的聲音,也可以像貢米一樣,有疑似某著名明星的長相。有了主題,你才是你,才會特別,才會被記住。每個人都有自己的主題,可以是與生俱來的天賦,可以是畢生奮斗的目標(biāo),也可以是兒時的志愿,就像春田花花同學(xué)會的同學(xué)們一樣,做一個醫(yī)生,或者一個啃雞腳的人。當(dāng)然,文書的主題要跟你的目標(biāo)結(jié)合,要跟你學(xué)習(xí)的領(lǐng)域結(jié)合。比如你想要去美國讀cs,將來建立一個強(qiáng)大的搜索引擎,不但信息全,品位也高。這個就是你的主題。比如你想要去美國讀傳媒,將來成為一個探求真相傳播理念的文化使者,為祖國的民主進(jìn)程,為人類的文化復(fù)興,奉獻(xiàn)終生。這個就是你的主題。當(dāng)然主題是需要接下來的部分進(jìn)行支持和闡述的,所以文章各個部分的內(nèi)容,要圍繞主題,彼此契合,才會讓整篇文章顯得流暢和完整。
在你整個文章中你的總括性段落是關(guān)鍵的,這是你捉住讀者注意的機(jī)會,吸引他們關(guān)注地閱讀你的文章,慢慢來,別著急,可以嘗試各種展示你優(yōu)點的其它方式。好的開場自吸引讀者使他們投入你的文章,驅(qū)動他們細(xì)細(xì)地閱讀你的個人故事,總括性段落的末了得有個小結(jié)承上啟下,但是記得不要只寫一個小結(jié),要戲劇化地。帶出你的下文,原則上,你的簡介必須是所述內(nèi)容的激動人心的梗概。
主體文章:讓人明白你要傳達(dá)的訊息主要段落必須包含你按照年代順序或重要程度排列的事件,經(jīng)歷和活動你可以自由地發(fā)揮你認(rèn)為值得重視的成就,可以寫得特定而詳細(xì),告訴讀者你值得被錄取,讓他們知道在申請入學(xué)的一班人馬中,你在某一方面不僅合格而且大大高于其他人的水準(zhǔn),注意:不要顯得拖沓,每個段落必須包含一個單獨的主題,并加以評述,你的結(jié)束段必須以積極的口吻結(jié)尾,重申你的目標(biāo),按照你所申請學(xué)校的預(yù)期要求撰寫。
個人陳述是“頭重”的文件格式,因此,你文章的結(jié)束部分不應(yīng)有戲劇性的部分,如果你文章的主體末尾已經(jīng)很具說服力,則不用寫上結(jié)束段落,若你打算寫個結(jié)束語,確信不要重復(fù)你的介紹性部分,重申你的目標(biāo)和動機(jī)是可取的,你必須以某種方式給讀者留下持續(xù)的印象。
文書的內(nèi)容要根據(jù)每個人的特點來定,如果你身材火辣但卻五音不全,那你一定要表演跳舞而不是唱歌,如果你普通話很爛但是精通美音英音澳音,那你一定要表演英文歌曲聯(lián)唱而不是唐詩朗誦。老師在進(jìn)行提高學(xué)生背景,挖掘?qū)W生背景以及提煉學(xué)生優(yōu)勢申請素材的時候會先給同學(xué)們做一個信息表,提出很多的問題,幫助同學(xué)們來思考和辨別,哪些才是契合主題的信息,哪些才是對申請有利的材料,哪些才是會打動教授的內(nèi)容。比如是哪個人物,或者哪件事情,讓你鐘情于此專業(yè),是什么樣的想法或者際遇,幫你堅定了到美國學(xué)習(xí)的夢想,在學(xué)習(xí)的過程中,你收獲了怎樣的心得,進(jìn)行了哪些創(chuàng)新,在研究的過程中,你采用了怎樣的方法,取得了怎樣的成果;在實踐的過程中,你遇到了哪些新的問題,是怎樣解決和克服的;根據(jù)不同學(xué)生的不同情況會提出不同的問題。
一篇好的文書還需要一個特別的結(jié)尾,就好像一個演出有一個驚艷并且有力的ending,能夠使教授對你的好感瞬間變的波濤洶涌,錄取你的愿望變的干柴烈火。要做到這一點其實不簡單。有一個在加州irvine讀書的同學(xué)曾經(jīng)跟老師講起,他們系的教授每到申請旺季都會跑到深山中租一個靠近湖邊的小木屋,就是為了能夠潛心閱讀國際申請者(其中包括70%的中國學(xué)生)的ps,足見這個過程給予他們怎樣的痛苦。所以建議各位正在或者將要進(jìn)行自己的ps寫作的同學(xué)們,為了教授們的健康,請不要再寫像廢寢忘食、早出晚歸這樣的故事,也不要再描述每天早上在操場或者小樹林里背單詞的場景,千萬千萬不要再出現(xiàn)像上課積極回答問題,課后按時完成各科作業(yè)這樣的詞句。一個好的申請者是懂得獲取,同時也懂得貢獻(xiàn)的。不要僅僅想著拼命刻苦就能夠滿足教授的要求,要想一想,你的加入能夠給這個研究團(tuán)隊帶來什么,你能夠為未來的同學(xué)、課堂、系,和學(xué)校,帶來什么樣的體驗和影響。好的申請者和教授之間會像情侶的關(guān)系,彼此需要對方,也能夠滿足對方的需要,這樣才會讓教授覺得你們彼此契合,才會讓他相信你們未來在一起會有很好的溝通和合作。
美國大學(xué)留學(xué)申請書篇三
尊敬的領(lǐng)導(dǎo):
我選擇地理的一個主要原因是這個原因有很多細(xì)分鏈接。我想在高等教育中繼續(xù)學(xué)習(xí)地理,因為我覺得它很有趣。我喜歡這個主題,因為它的內(nèi)容以及它與許多其他主題重疊的方式。因此,這使地理成為一門非常有用的學(xué)科,我非??释^續(xù)了解和發(fā)展這一學(xué)科。因為地理與許多其他科目重疊,并且該課程包含許多技術(shù)和技能,我發(fā)現(xiàn)它是未來工作場所中非常有用的工具。我喜歡了解如何以及最重要的是為什么。如果這包括為什么這些商業(yè)園區(qū)位于郊區(qū)邊緣,以及為什么全球地震分布會影響該特定區(qū)域的人類活動。我相信地理將培養(yǎng)我的分析技能,這很重要,因為我想成為武裝部隊的情報官員。我也喜歡旅行,我的知識和技術(shù)幫助我解釋了很多事情,比如馬耳他地區(qū)梯田農(nóng)業(yè)和佛羅里達(dá)州基礎(chǔ)設(shè)施的原因。我中學(xué)時老師曾對我說
“旅行,你開始注意到你周圍的事物,你能夠理解那里的某些事物是什么以及為什么”
我目前正在學(xué)習(xí)a2地理和生物學(xué)。這也伴隨著我在第一年完成的as體育和as物理。我很喜歡我今年的課程,因為我發(fā)現(xiàn)與去年的物理相比,我發(fā)現(xiàn)內(nèi)容相對容易消化。去年我發(fā)現(xiàn)這個主題相當(dāng)具有挑戰(zhàn)性,因為內(nèi)容主要由數(shù)字、數(shù)字、理論和集合方程組成,其中一些難以解釋。與今年iamdo的課程相反,我發(fā)現(xiàn)內(nèi)容更易于使用,因為我可以將其與視覺情況聯(lián)系起來。去年我喜歡這門課程的部分內(nèi)容,因為那里的科目之間有明顯的聯(lián)系。一年之中,地理和生物學(xué)的交叉瞬間不止一次。我開發(fā)了新技能,例如口語和與他人一起完成課程作業(yè)正如我上面提到的,我對未來的抱負(fù)在于武裝部隊。我需要具備良好的分析能力以及良好的口語能力。作為情報人員的一部分是能夠注釋圖片和許多其他數(shù)據(jù)源,即紅外線
學(xué)習(xí)地理將幫助我將這些技能發(fā)展到我所選擇的專業(yè)領(lǐng)域公認(rèn)的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)。我也想在未來旅行,我的地理知識將幫助我更詳細(xì)地了解我去過的地方
我有過一次帶薪工作經(jīng)驗和一次工作實習(xí)經(jīng)驗。在我的工作經(jīng)歷中,我曾在h+s航空工作。這是一家修理直升機(jī)和輕型飛機(jī)的公司。在此期間,我體會到滿足客戶迫切需要的這些引擎的最后期限的重要性。我還建立了一個團(tuán)隊并與許多部門合作。我學(xué)到的一項重要技能是對細(xì)節(jié)的關(guān)注/這非常重要,因為最輕微的不準(zhǔn)確都可能導(dǎo)致飛機(jī)發(fā)動機(jī)發(fā)生故障,從而導(dǎo)致客戶死亡。在我的有償工作期間,我在asda的一家咖啡館工作。我在這里學(xué)到了許多重要的課程,例如健康和安全以及食品衛(wèi)生。我也在繁忙的環(huán)境中鍛煉,良好的溝通和團(tuán)隊技能是實現(xiàn)目標(biāo)所必需的。我覺得我學(xué)到的許多技能不僅與地理有關(guān),而且與生活本身有關(guān)。團(tuán)隊技能可以在實地工作以及滿足最后期限和對細(xì)節(jié)的關(guān)注中得到很好的利用。這些都體現(xiàn)在課程和大學(xué)生活的某些方面
我非常喜歡體育活動,它們對社會福祉很重要。我喜歡打高爾夫球,尤其是足球。我已經(jīng)達(dá)到了法勒姆鎮(zhèn)的半職業(yè)球員,我在這個級別的處子秀中打進(jìn)了制勝一球,這是有史以來第三位做到這一點的球員。我也曾在樸茨茅斯、南安普頓和伯恩茅斯等主要的南海岸職業(yè)球隊進(jìn)行過試訓(xùn)。我喜歡釣魚和露營等休閑活動,并且我在夏天定期外出進(jìn)行這些活動
我也喜歡在周末與朋友社交,但足球通常優(yōu)先于社交。城市周圍有一些特定區(qū)域可以一起鍛煉。我喜歡與家人共度時光,要么晚上出去,要么在周末露營和釣魚,或者只是踢足球或打高爾夫球。
此致
敬禮!
申請人:xxx
xx年xx月xx日
美國大學(xué)留學(xué)申請書篇四
尊敬的x,
我申請xx研究生院的目的是擴(kuò)展我現(xiàn)有的知識,并在未來為自己創(chuàng)造更多的機(jī)會。我相信研究生院將為我在航空航天業(yè)的成功和具有挑戰(zhàn)性的職業(yè)生涯做好準(zhǔn)備。
盡管我選擇了動力學(xué)作為我的專業(yè)領(lǐng)域,但我對航空航天的其他領(lǐng)域持開放態(tài)度,這樣我就不會限制自己。我目前在jpl擔(dān)任學(xué)術(shù)兼職職位,我相信這種第一手經(jīng)驗將闡明我未來的教育需求和方向。
在加州大學(xué)洛杉磯分校就讀期間,我曾擔(dān)任過多個兼職職位,其中包括擔(dān)任計算機(jī)顧問、autocad操作員以及加州大學(xué)洛杉磯分校無損評估實驗室的實驗室。我多樣化的工作經(jīng)歷讓我更好地了解了我可以獲得哪些機(jī)會。我想學(xué)習(xí)和理解的東西太多了。我一直對太空計劃著迷,總有一天,我想在太空計劃中發(fā)揮作用。
自從我父親與我分享他發(fā)表的一些工程評論以來,我就一直想成為一名工程師。我一直是一個勤奮的人,并表明我可以處理各種各樣的工作負(fù)荷,將工作和大學(xué)融入我的日程安排中。
我相信加州大學(xué)洛杉磯分校可以為我提供在航空航天業(yè)取得成功的工具。作為一名本科生,我很享受就讀加州大學(xué)洛杉磯分校,也很享受在這里成為一名研究生。
此致
敬禮!
xxx
20xx年xx月xx日
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